Talk about a good end to a bad day, poor guy has everything that can possibly go wrong occur and then one giant improvement fixes it all. The pacing goes well, the music accompanies it nicely all, and all it's and enjoyable little story.
I think that the story was there, but I wouldn't know that it would have been as clear to anyone who hadn't heard the pitch. I liked the actor, i think he should have had more dialogue of him calling work to say he'll be late because of his car breaking down and then have him get fired. I wanted to see more of the invention!
I wish it was clearer he was on his way to work.. there were some weird editing errors. Maybe the use of a tripod of would have helped. Otherwise, there were some cool shots and the story was clearly played out. good job!
When the guy is on the phone at the end I like how you guys edited in the sound of the guy on the phone. You guys did good with background information. Some shots lasted a little too long.
The sound was great. the music fading out in the end was a great touch. Although, i was confused by the car break down scene; I didn't hear or see why the car stopped and thought he was calling to meet someone because he was still in the neighborhood.
it had a nice pace to it. the music really fit the editing (or vice versa)
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the sound with the phone calls.
ReplyDeleteTalk about a good end to a bad day, poor guy has everything that can possibly go wrong occur and then one giant improvement fixes it all. The pacing goes well, the music accompanies it nicely all, and all it's and enjoyable little story.
ReplyDeleteI think that the story was there, but I wouldn't know that it would have been as clear to anyone who hadn't heard the pitch. I liked the actor, i think he should have had more dialogue of him calling work to say he'll be late because of his car breaking down and then have him get fired. I wanted to see more of the invention!
ReplyDeleteI wish it was clearer he was on his way to work.. there were some weird editing errors. Maybe the use of a tripod of would have helped. Otherwise, there were some cool shots and the story was clearly played out. good job!
ReplyDeleteThe video was very good, especially where they do the shots of the phone calls. The song of the video fit the story.
ReplyDeleteGreat camerawork, there were a lot of interesting shots. I think the pacing could have been faster at times.
ReplyDeletethere was a lot of camera angles, and i can see the effert put in. But the camera was shaky and parts were hard to fallow.
ReplyDeleteWhen the guy is on the phone at the end I like how you guys edited in the sound of the guy on the phone. You guys did good with background information. Some shots lasted a little too long.
ReplyDeleteThe sound was great. the music fading out in the end was a great touch. Although, i was confused by the car break down scene; I didn't hear or see why the car stopped and thought he was calling to meet someone because he was still in the neighborhood.
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